The proposal explains the
already completed critical groundwork and shows how the student
plans to build on that foundation. The chapters are components
of a plan, with all parts closely and logically linked, traveling
from general to specific descriptions.
2.1
Proposal Chapter I: Purpose
Background:
Students must describe the setting in which the problem occurs. The
description provides information regarding the facility, the
personnel, and existing programs at the setting. A description
of the community from which the target group comes to the
facility should be included. In some cases, the focus will
be on the socio-economic characteristics of the community.
Other factors such as the level of parental involvement, data
about total school enrollment, class size, or teacher pupil
ratios might be important for a school project. The clientele
using the facility or agency should be described. Be sure
to include data about all factors that may be contributing
to the "problem" you are planning to address.
CAUTION! In describing the
setting fully, do not identify the school, school district,
hospital, facility, or target group members by name. Do
not create aliases for these. Simply write: "the school," "the target group,"
"the district"...
Problem Statement
Define a problem
at the target setting in operational terms: a discrepancy
between "what is" and "what should be." Statistics will show
"what is." State or agency imposed standards may show "what
should be." A newly emerging set of negatives or a foreseeable
difficulty may be predicted. The origins of such difficulty
can be documented early with needs assessment data.
In other words, "Why is this a problem?" There must be a discrepancy,
a difference, between what is and what should be happening.
What is must be supported by hard evidence (data, statistics—not
opinion) that such a gap exists in the project setting. The
administrator/verifier might help the student secure the statistical
documentation. The purpose of the project, then, is to close
that discrepancy gap.
For example:
"Eleventh grade students are reading at the ninthgrade level,
as documented by test scores." That would be a problem. The
discrepancy is the 2-grade-level gap between actual and expected
reading levels; the evidence is in the test scores. Scores
must be presented for each member of the target group. The
compilation of all this preliminary data to support the problem
is called a needs assessment.
A needs assessment
is made up of statistics that provide evidence of the problem.
Students and their Advisors/Coaches decide which group of
documents can provide appropriate statistics. Examining records
or committee reports, or observing routines, may be useful
in establishing the core of a problem. An applied research
student must look beyond the outward indicators of the problem
and get beneath the surface to find out what is really wrong.
A way to find what is beneath the surface might be to question
former teachers and find out what the causes of the problem
may have been.
Data gathered
by observation methods must have criteria and include structured
observation instruments used in the collection process. The
critical term here is "structured." The observation must be
deliberate, conducted formally, systematically, and often
enough over time to give the collected data some reliability.
Informal observations will not produce the necessary statistics.
See Constructing a Needs Assessment for assistance.
Students must
include a clear description of the target group. Students
can use such facts as ages and grade levels, special needs,
behavior, attendance, health, and other factors that may have
bearing on the problem for a school project. Students working
in the private sectors can use such facts as numbers of workers
at each level, qualifications of those workers, services provided
to the community, goals and expectations of the administration,
and/or perhaps responses of the community to the services.
There may be more than one target group in some cases. For
example, teachers helping with the implementation must be
trained in the solution strategies. Their students who will
receive the new strategies become a second target group. Target
groups may include students, parents, volunteers, teachers,
staff, or personnel at the facility. In private facilities,
target groups may include staff, clientele, service organization
members, etc.
Educational
Specialist Students' Convention 1 of 4
The
participating subjects must be comprised of a minimnum of
two target groups with whom the student will be interacting.
Data must be provided for both groups.
The problem
statement chapter should not include a review of literature.
If it is necessary to show the relationship of the local problem
to a general (global) problem, related reviews should be written
in Chapter II. This definition of the problem provides the
basis for projecting outcome objectives (terminal performance
objectives/results) that you will create..
These are the
main factors to include in the problem statement.
Description
of the problem to be addressed
Current practices
and reasons for their ineffectiveness, as indicated by the
needs assessment data
Complete
description of the target group (or groups)
Statistics
of the target group(s) to document the problem
Discussion
on probable causes and effects of the problem, based on
data
Discrepancy
statement
Educational Specialist: Convention 2 of 4
The
topic must address an issue of significance to the educational
community, rather than one restricted to the setting alone.
Students should attempt, within this project, to extend their
influence beyond the boundaries of their current professional
responsibilities.
2.2
Proposal Chapter II: Research and Planned Solution Strategy
The review of professional
research is important in considering how to achieve the project
objectives. Students are to look for literature on the identified
problem.The Research and Planned Solution Strategy chapter
has two parts.
The
first part of this chapter, Research, contains
reviews of related literature on the problem, must be at least
10 pages in length, and should contain descriptions of the
authors' projects. It should reflect a literature search of
a minimum of 15 primary sources(Ed Specialist: 30
primary sources). The second part,Planned Solution
Strategies, should be only a few paragraphs long
and should identify, in general, the strategies that have
been selected for use from the research reviewed in the first
part of the chapter. Primary sources are those
articles, reports, or books written by the individual(s) who
conducted the research. These can be found in professional
journals. Examples are listed in all course syllabi.:
Educational Specialist: Convention 3 of 4
Students
must review a minimum of 30 primary sources.
Before making
strategy decisions, students must examine a number of reasonable
possibilities.Sources other than classics must be
recent, within the last 10 years. The topics of cited research
should include at least:
theory related to
the problem;
suggestions for solutions
to the problem; and
reviews of programs attempted to solve similar problems elsewhere.
DANGER! ...........................................SLOW
DOWN and THINK!
Students
should focus on reviewing research on the
PROBLEM,
rather than looking for support for a solution they have
in mind. It is not appropriate to investigate only sources
that support a predetermined solution.
Library Services
Students' computer
search should be done online. The best place to look for the
primary sources that you need is in the NSU Library in the
ERIC database. You will find a great many articles and projects
there. If you are having difficulty accessing the NSU library
with your NSU email account and password, telephone the Helpdesk
(262-HELP or 800-986-3223-HELP) for assistance.
If there is
little information from the requested descriptors, students
could use the abstracts from related descriptor topics as
guides for possible alternative descriptors. Reference lists
from these selections may lead to works by other authors on
a similar topic. The important point to keep in mind is that
articles should be primary in nature. They should be from
the professional literature in the field and not from textbooks.
In addition
to ordering research articles from results of the required
computer search, students could gather information about possible
strategies from Educational Impact or:
visits to
other facilities,
consultation
with specialists,
discussions with staff,
manual searches
of current books and journal articles in the library, and/or
The first step
in preparing the literature review is to read abstracts obtained
from the search to eliminate inappropriate material. The strategies
selected to deal with a problem must bear some relationship
to what others have done before, whether parallel or opposite
in nature. The literature review should articulate this relationship.
For example, with a prpject on improving faculty relations
in a community college, the writer could draw from the resources
on group dynamics although the cited resources were not directly
related to a community college problem.
As students
select current literature related to the problem, they must
obtain entire articles and summarize the reported methods
and results. Although a minimum of 15 primary sources in separate
reviews is recommended, (10 for 3 credit MS, 30 for EdS),
most master's students and their advisors find that 20 or
more reviews provide a more complete picture (more than 30
may be needed for a comprehensive representation of the literature
for EdS. students).
Students may
report on exemplary strategies observed in a particular setting.
This can be especially helpful if prospective project strategies
are being used there. Students acknowledge these items on
the reference list as unpublished manuscripts or proceedings
of meetings and symposia. Theories and applications should
be explained. Students should review as many methods and results
as possible. Then they can compare those situations to the
locally identified problem, noting the uniqueness of the particular
perspective. By remaining open to ideas practiced by others,
students can develop unique strategies to address the identified
problem.
Organize all
articles into a cohesive narrative, remembering to use citations
of authors for each paragraph. Students must synthesize the
articles into a comprehensive whole, providing a logical progression
of support for the proposed solution. Grouping the studies
that share the same characteristics will help to create a
smoothly prepared chapter. Paraphrase information from original
articles as much as possible, using direct quotes only for
coined terms or other unique wording. In reviewing each piece
of literature, students must state:
the author
and date,
what was
done (description of the study),
how it
was done (target group and strategies),
what was
accomplished (results of the study), and
possible
applicability to the projected project.
The review of one author's work may be complete in as little as two
or three paragraphs, or it may be as long as two pages. It
is not appropriate to use computer search abstracts in place
of complete reviews. All reviews of literature should be written
in the "historical present" or past tense, since they have
all been done previously. The only exception would be in using
direct quotes, which must be exact. This will save time in
making verb tense changes for the final report. The References
list should contain only items that were actually reviewed
and cited within the text. All sources cited
in this chapter must be included in the References list.
The Planned
Solution Strategy, the second part of this chapter, should
be separated from the reviews with a subheading. After reviewing
all of the collected literature, students should name, and
generally explain, the strategies selected for use as a planned
solution to their identified problem. Students can combine
the strongest of the reviewed methods to create a unique implementation
plan. The rationale for strategy selection should include
names of the authors whose works inspired their selection.
The rationale
should explain how the literature review accomplishes at least
one of the following:
shows
that strategies have been used successfully in similar
situations,
shows
that using strategies from dissimilar situations is suitable
for this setting,
shows
that an unsuccessful strategy from another setting can
be expected to work in this setting.
To summarize
instructions for the contents of this chapter, students should:
review
professional literature including theory and strategies,
weigh
and select the most promising and workable solution strategies,
and
explain
the reasoning behind strategy selections.
Finally, double check that all authors
have been correctly cited and that their entries appear on the
References list. Also make sure that all entries on the References
list are reviewed in Chapter II> Students should follow carefully
their advisors’ recommendations on refinements.
2.3 Chapter
III: Objectives and Implementation Plan Outcome Objectives
Outcome objectives, or
terminal performance objectives, explain what will be achieved
by the end of the project in measurable terms. Each objective
should be related to statistics presented in the problem statement
and should specify expected changes. Purposes of the objectives
may be skill improvement, group cooperation, program evaluation,
self-evaluation, staff evaluation, or others, as needed. The
desired outcomes and what the target group can be expected
to accomplish should be specified before making decisions
on new strategies. Students also must specify criteria
for measurement (achievement or change) and name the evaluation
tool (or tools) to be used.
Educational
Specialist: Convention 4 of 4
Students
must conduct formative procedures prior to or during implementation,
so immediate procedural needs or adjustments to the setting
can be addressed early in implementation. The formative procedure
can be stated as an objective if it is completed during implementation
rather than while collecting preliminary data.
Each
objective includes four basic parts.
The
time in which the student expects the change to
occur:
"Over
a period of four months...
OR "At the end of the unit on
water power..."
The target group
(every member of the target group):
"....the targeted fourth-grade students....
OR "....Group A will...."
The expected observable/measurable behaviors (the minimum
expected success criteria for all):
"...will
increase multiplication skills by 10 %...
OR "....read at least one book from the reading list each week..."
The evaluation tool that the student will use to measure the
expected results:
"...as
measured by the Mathematics Abilities Test."
OR
"...as indicated on the Parent Reading Checklist."
Students should be careful
to avoid wording that states that the target group "will receive
instruction." Instead, the transitive (active voice) should
be used. A suggested replacement should be that they "will
participate in…" The objectives should clearly state
how the target group will participate in learning, in terms
of its activities—the performance. Students should not
include objectives for their own tasks, such as preparing
materials or making arrangements for meetings. The following
examples are provided as models. Citations are used for teacher-made
items that would be placed in appendixes.
From an elementary
or intermediate education project:
Over
a period of 12 weeks, the students in the target group will
increase their skills in public speaking by 90% as shown
by the Jones Public Speaking Rater scores on the final presentation
(Appendix L:)
From a mathematics
project:
After 14
weeks of participating in a project using hands-on activities,the
10 targeted students will demonstrate increased computation
skills as shown by scoring a minimum of 70% mastery level
or above on the Math Computation Posttest (Appendix E).
From a computer science education project:
During a
12-week program of using specifically designed software,
the target group will use 15 of 20 procedures in initiating
individual computer-generated architectural designs with
85% accuracy as evaluated on the Procedure Rating Scale
(Appendix C).
Process/product objectives are objectives that identify a process
that results in a product. In a project that results in a product
(such as a curriculum guide, training manual, a new policy,
a video, etc.), the product itself is rated in order to provide
validation. Validation should be done by "experts " as a formative
measure prior to implementing the new process with a target
group. The following sample shows how a process can be measured.
After the
target group has participated in a 16-week collaborative
project to rewrite and use a revised science curriculum
guide, the sience faculty will rate the guide at a minimum
of level four on a 5-point Likert-scaled Curriculum Evaluation
(Appendix D)
To create objectives for possible side benefits of the new strategies,
students must consider what other functions will be affected
by the project. For example: if a student wants an objective
of improving reading skills, one objective must address that
directly. Then, there may be one on the anticipated change in
the target group's reading grades. Attitudinal change may be
an important part of the projected outcomes, but it must
have been presented as part of the problem in the previous section.
It should not be the major concern. Just remember that each
of the obujectives must reflect part of the identified problem.
Tests used to measure
objectives are to be identified by title in the objectives.
Whether these are teacher-created assessments or standardized
tests, the reader can judge the effectiveness of the new strategies
by looking at the comparison of pre- and posttest scores.
Therefore, all scores are to be tallied and reported. Other
evaluations might include formal observation, or portfolios.
Students select the format according to the objectives' requirements.
Types of measurements used might be surveys, rating scales,
essays, multiple choice tests, true/false, charts, tallies,
grade books, school records, formal observation, formal interviews,
and so on.
CAUTION: SLOW
DOWN
Any measure of
change must be based only on progress DURING project implementation.
If increased achievement
is the educational goal, increases in scores would be proof
of that achievement. Students may use scores from an annual
test regularly administered at a school as baseline data for
selection of a target group. But, annual tests cannot be used
to measure 12 weeks of skills improvement. Carefully word
objectives so they show how you will measure an increase in
skills or concept mastery.
Click
on the link below for assistance with finding appropriate
verbs for your objectives. This list is also located on the
Student Services page under Academic Writing.
The implementation
plan chapter describes the action phase. Usually, students
achieve successful implementation without difficulty by simply
following the strategies and timelines outlined in this chapter.
Administrators/verifiers
can bevaluable resources during the implementation planning
phase, especially when students wish to solve problems that
have implications beyond the immediate setting. Permission
from the administrator/verifier is needed to conduct the implementation.
Examples could include informing parents of any changes to
be made and soliciting their cooperation, involving volunteers
or peer educators, changing the daily schedule, asking for
cooperation of other teachers or administrators, or using
new computer software.
The following are all
actions that may require the administrator/verifier's help.
brief identification
and sequence of necessary tasks,
identification
of people, materials, and equipment needed,
establishment
of a weekly timeline of specific target group activities,
establishment
of a process for monitoring progress, and
development
of an evaluation/assessment schedule.
Creating the Matrix of Activities*
A matrix is a
type of table that contains cross references.
One factor must be the timeline.
Another is the tasks to be done by the
writer.
A third is the
activities to be completed by the target group(s).
It might look like this for a 12-week implementation:
Weeks
Teacher Tasks
Materials
Teaching Strategies
Subjects' Learning Activities
Pre-implementation Preparation
Week
1:
Objective
1, (decision making)
Preview
software
Prepare
classroom arrangement
Log
Markers
Tag
board paper
Sparkles
Peer
group planning
Explore
software
Select
group topic
Make
a group poster showing plan
Week
2:
Objective 1 (cont.)
Log
......
.......
Transfer poster to a tech file, with plan details
Week
3
Log
..
..
..
Week
4
Evaluate and adjust strategies,
if needed for 3-credit projects.
Log
..
..
..
Week
5
Log
..
..
..
Week
6
Evaluate
and adjust strategies, if needed for 6-credit projects.
Log
..
..
..
Week
7
Log
..
..
..
Week
8
Prepare posttest forms for 3-credit projects
Log
..
..
Complete
posttests for 3-credit projects.
(Three-credit projects end here.)
Week
9
Log
..
..
..
Week
10
Log
..
..
..
Week
11
Log
..
..
..
Week
12
Prepare
posttest forms for 6-credit projects.
Log
...fill
in
...fill
in
Complete
posttests for 6-credit projects.
(Six-credit
projects end here.)
This
matrix will become part of the Appendixes in the final report
2.4
Chapter IV: Evaluation/Assessment Plan
This chapter
should include the Outcome Objectives. Properly written objectives
include the name of the evaluation tools. Students should
describe tools named in the objectives, thus accounting for
each objective. Students must include a copy of each teacher-made
or teacher-adapted test in the appendixes. Standardized tests
should not be included in the appendixes, but their function
within the project should beexplained. Students should briefly
describe the testing procedures.
Students should
use this chapter to:
describe
each evaluation tool named in objectives and
explain the
procedure planned for pretest, median, and posttest use.
explain how the
data will be collected and reported.
2.5 Reference List, Copyright Laws, and Appendixes
The References
list should be arranged in alphabetical order by author without
subheadings. Students should cite authors in the body of the
proposal by surnames (without given names or titles) and copyright
dates exactly as written on the Reference List. In writing
citations, students should not change the order of authors'
names when citing an item by two or more authors. The citation
must match the References list entry.
Copyrighted
documents that CAN be included in personal documents (that means your
proposal and report) with only a reference citation are:
one page
of a longer original document
one page
of a workbook sample.
Copyrighted documents that CANNOT be included
in personal documents without a permission letter from the publisher
are:
original
documents,
photocopies
of original documents,
retyped
or rearranged copies of original documents,
redesigned
materials originated by anyone other than the student,
standardized tests.
DANGER!
Copyright laws are
very specific about what can be placed in a personal document
without written permission of the publisher. Students must
be aware that the documents you create for GTEP courses are
personal documents. Documents that contain copyright violations
will receive a failing grade and dismissal from
the University will result.
If the school,
school district, facility, or student has purchased commercial
materials, there is no need to secure permission for their
use during implementation. Written permission from the publisher
is needed only for their placement in the student's proposal
or final report.
Appendixes should
include the items that have been named and cited in the main
body of the document. At the very least, the appendixes should
include copies of any survey forms, interview questions, and
student- or teacher-made tests related to the documentation
of the problem and the objectives. For instances in which
students include only selected data from problem-defining
surveys (or interviews or tests) in the body of the proposal,
it is proper to provide complete tabulation of the responses
in the proposal appendixes. Students should place appendixes
in the same order as they were first cited in text and designated
as A, B, C, etc.
2.6 Finishing Touch Components for the Final Proposal
Creating
the title:
Components
of the title should provide information about:
the major area of study,
the problem to be solved,
the target group, and
strategies to be used.
This can be
written in several arrangements. No clichés, catchy titles, or hidden meanings should be used. The title should
be restricted to 15 or fewer words.
Example
#1
Helping
Secondary ESL Students Increase Skills in Written English
Through Journal Writing
ANALYSIS:
major, TESOL
target group/major:
high school ESL students
problem/objective:
increase English writing skills
strategy:
journal writing
Example #2
Using
Computer Assisted Instruction with Media Center Volunteers
to Refine Cataloging of Audio Visuals
The abstract should be about ½ page
long, single spaced, and placed as page 2.
Place it immediately following the title
page and before the table of contents.
The following components should be written
in future tense:
identify
the program that is planned,
state
the problem,
identify
the target group, goal, and objectives,
list
strategies to solve the problem, and
state
the names of measurement tools that will be used.
Submit
your finished proposal to your advisor in this order:
Cover Sheet, no page number
APA Checklist, complete it
with no page number
Title Page, no page number,
but it is really page 1
Abstract, page 2
Table of Contents, page 3
Chapters, page 4-.......
References, next page after
last text page
Appendixes,next page after
References, continue numbering.
WARNING:
Students
who implement their projects before Advisor/Coach
approval of the completed proposalswill
fail the course and
be required to register again to complete a new project.
Students may not use projects that have been implemented before registering
for the applied research project.
What
should you do? CALL YOUR ADVISOR!
YOU ARE IN DANGER OF FAILING!
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